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[SEIJUROXD]_NO-MORE-PAIN]

on Sat Oct 15, 2016 2:33 pm
Hi. This is my last clip which reflects my current level.
        
 ddl: mediafire.com file/j8dkv2t7sa4zkvt/%5BSeijuroXD%5D-No_More_Pain.mp4
               
             
             
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Re: [SEIJUROXD]_NO-MORE-PAIN]

on Sat Oct 15, 2016 3:59 pm
You've gotten better. Good synch, there where some good scenes in there like, but others need working on.
But that audio cut Evil or Very Mad bad bad bad lol
Just try to work on your scene selection and make your next project with a single anime (and a good audio cut xD)
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on Sat Oct 15, 2016 4:14 pm
Well, mostly the audio cut. tHX KURORO!!!!
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Re: [SEIJUROXD]_NO-MORE-PAIN]

on Sat Oct 15, 2016 7:41 pm
you could have done much better, you skipped a lot of strong beats on the black bullet part, the action start also needed to have a stronger impact and you could have used the scenes another way to make them flow better (like those masks at 0:35). When the FMAB part started i was afraid at the start that you would have spammed the openings like everyone does, but i was wrong (thank god), yet you could have done better on the action bit as well once FMAB has great animation.
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Re: [SEIJUROXD]_NO-MORE-PAIN]

on Sat Oct 15, 2016 10:51 pm
thx spike. I took notes
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Re: [SEIJUROXD]_NO-MORE-PAIN]

on Sun Oct 23, 2016 2:59 pm
What spike and kurokaze said^
Keep it up, will be waiting for new projects to see progress!

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