Nice story and theme you guys have here, but what I did not like was the multiplications of effects. I get you guys have different styles, but try to not over do it in your effects and etc. What was nice to see in a few parts were the ones at 1:01 and 1:40. What you guys have the same are your creative techniques and your zooms. Instead of trying to make 1 part stand out the most try making the video stand out as a whole.