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TheOblivion6277
TheOblivion6277
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Join date : 2016-12-19
Age : 28
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Mon Dec 19, 2016 6:36 am
Hi!
Here's our collab:


The story (if someone didn't catch that):
Basically, we meet young lady Kotomi who falls in love with a cute boy. Everything could be okay and cute if her parents weren't fighting with each other all the time. The violence is all around her, she even got raped. What kind of childhood is that? One day her whole life turns to ashes as her home burnt down. Happily, she was saved by her cute-lover-hero-boy.
Time passes, lovers were away from each other for a while but they met again. All feelings are coming back but... there's another girl on the way to Kotomi's happiness. What could she do to get her dream-boy-who-lives-with-other-girl-and-even-has-a-child back? There are multiple possibilities but Kotomi's childhood wasn't great at all and since the only thing our little butterfly loved was taken away, she gone mad.
sley89
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Join date : 2016-12-15

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Tue Dec 20, 2016 3:36 pm
oh my heart I love you so beautiful
Shinzui
Shinzui
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Join date : 2016-10-27
Age : 26
Location : US, California
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Wed Dec 21, 2016 1:32 am
Good story, but I didn't like the coloring. It seemed unnatural and off. There were also things like zooms and etc. that could be fixed as well. Nevertheless it was a good watch and GL on results.
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Cear
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Join date : 2016-10-23
Age : 26
Location : Hell

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Wed Dec 28, 2016 8:42 pm
Camera movements and CC killed me, but it's not bad overall
Arrow
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Join date : 2016-06-24
Location : Rhodes, Greece
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Fri Jan 13, 2017 1:44 pm
Concept and story were very good, and the scene selection was very decent as well.
It could've even been 1st place if there werent so many editing mistakes :/
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Location : Rhodes, Greece
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Fri Jan 13, 2017 1:46 pm
I am expecting things from you for our next IC Wink
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