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Paradox (psyche)

on Tue Jul 25, 2017 8:22 pm
i had fun making this. i hope it could have been better. regardless here it is:


anime used: Erased, Steins Gate, Rezero, Rewrite, Evangelion 1.11, Psycho pass,  Fate/Zero, Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, Tokyo Ghoul, The girl who leapt through time, Grisaia no Meikyuu: Caprice no Mayu 0, Terror in Resonance

song used: Octane nick road

GL to everyone. enjoy. Plz provide your thoughts on it
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Re: Paradox (psyche)

on Mon Aug 07, 2017 10:35 pm
I thought that this deserved a lil' higher, but thats what happens when you judge with others Razz
Some bits felt a bit lazy, like 0:32 and the masks 0:40, 0:44, 0:47, 1:13 (it's mostly the movement you added that make them not look good).
The concept has clearly been done before, but let's put that aside. I liked some compositions of yours, 1:04, 1:17.
When you pick a song like this try to hit as many beats as possible, and dont let scene take so much time. Also try to connect the scenes with a way different than mask transitions.
Overall, i found it rather interesting, good job.

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